The Daily Mail reported that the 2 of Britain's most injured soldiers laid wreaths down in honour of other fallen soldiers. The Daily mail reported that both soldiers were emotional at the time of the event but glad that they had been there too pay their respects. The Daily Mail also reported several stories about remembrance Sunday all over the country including Jeremy Corbyn's appearance which was "mocked" by allot of people. Remembrance day is always big news as it is an old tradition. People want to hear about it and what is happening.
News like this is important to share as it shows recognition for soldiers who have died or have been injured in the line of war. It is also shows the sacrifices people have made for others. Audience also want to read about these kinds of stories as it shows that people who in fought in war have not been forgotten.
Your article was breif and understandable and you also made use of visual evidence to back up your article. I was able to understand the centimental value behind the event. However to extend your analysis, you could have included your personal option towards this event and also what type of article it is. Other than that fantastic article. :)
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ReplyDeletewell done! Good that you added the pictures and that you name you source.
Next time you could add your own opinion about the happening.
Johanna
You have included a lot of information on what the article is about which is good, you also mentioned the audience. You also put in a picture to help explain the article. To improve, you should try and express your own opinion and thoughts on the matter.
ReplyDeleteNice analysis of the article I also agree that the addition of pictures did help to back up your article and also gives more of an in depth view of the article
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